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Old 18th April 2008, 04:08 PM   #1
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Default Emotional? Bored? Confused?

Just looking for feedback on a proof for a new sell sheet. I would appreciate any feedback from both a selling perspective and from a consumer viewpoint.







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Old 18th April 2008, 04:23 PM   #2
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Well Done! Nothing to suggest - which should tell you more than a bit. Great job!

The only thing that came to mind - I did read through all of your text - was after all this will the gutters still be full of gunk?

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Well Done! Nothing to suggest - which should tell you more than a bit. Great job!

The only thing that came to mind - I did read through all of your text - was after all this will the gutters still be full of gunk?

I'll upsell you that service when I come out for your evaluation, Chris.

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Old 18th April 2008, 08:26 PM   #4
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Good job, Ken. I have nothing to suggest, either. The information is very convincing and well presented. What I particularly like about it is that you keep the jargon to a minimum so even people who know nothing about house washing (like me) understand what you're talking about. Well done!

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