A good tagline should be memorable. And just as important (maybe even more important) it should mean something.
Your tagline is going to end up being part of your Company Name / Logo, and it's going to represent your company in the mind of your customers.
So it's a good idea to have it represent what you want your company to stand for. It's even better if you can have it represent a benefit to your ideal customer.
Both of your choices (yours and your wife's) are easy enough to remember, so ask yourself... Which one ties in with your overall USP? (Assuming you've defined what your USP is?)
It would be easier to offer you a suggestion if I knew a bit more about your company, and your ideal customer.
Perhaps if you send a link to your website I could take a look, and then might be able to offer more help?
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