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Old 26th December 2015, 03:34 AM   #1
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Hi All again ,
Iím trying to write a good email content to promote an offer to some users in my email list ,
  • Iím wondering what is the best way to write some nice and attractive offer to the users.
  • Is there is any examples or templates that I can take advantages fromÖ

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Old 8th March 2016, 09:06 PM   #2
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Best advice I can give, is use the POD theory. Something I learned from Derek Helpern.

Problem - address the users problem
Obstacles - identify and overcome
Desire - show what its like without that problem in their life

You actually do the Problem, then the Desire, then show that your product/service will overcome the obstacles.

Also, this typically takes several emails to do, vs a one hit email.

Something to think about. Good luck!

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Hello, as per your question the first tip that I would be recommending to you is to focus on email subject line. Email subject line is the first thing that your readers would be viewing even before proceeding to the email body. Therefore, make sure that your email subject line is enticing enough to make your readers open the email. Keep an element of suspense in your email subject line while incorporating some offer to your emails works positively.

Second, try to write personalized emails while mentioning about some offer in your emails. This gives a feeling of being important in your reader's mind, and they instantly get attracted to your emails.

Third, make your emails short and crisp. Just mention the offer by adding attractive images and templates to your emails. This will again capture the attention of your readers thus making them fall in love with your email and offer. Also, add a click to action in your email body so that they can directly land up to the offer page of your website.

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Keep it short and simple if you want recipient to read along.

The subject should keep them curious to click on your email among the list.

Then start your email with a bold headline that offers benefit.

Excite or work on their emotion (this depends on your potential customers and the product or service that you offer) to motivate them to take the next step.

Then make sure that you end it with a call to action.

I hope this helps.

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I think the key to writing a pitch like this is to put yourself in the mind of your users. What do they care about? Write about that! Lead with a conversation about their pain point, and then you can bring in the solution (your offer).

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Aside from new and interesting features from your offers try to include some benefits in which will really help your target users.

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