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Old 19th February 2011, 07:56 PM   #2
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Hi Nancy

The copy part is fairly good - I would just switch the heading around a bit or put in a colon instead of the comma.

The newsletter sign up needs to be up the top (never say 'it' - always spell out what they are getting and how often) and the newsletter example should be more graphically attractive. Look around the internet for examples.

As a support person you cannot possibly be great at everything and I would ask (ever so gently) for you to rethink trying to offer web design. Leave that to the experts and grow yourself an alliance base of designers, copywriters, and marketing consultants that can also help your trusted clients.

A client friend of mine has a similar business so why not check her site out at: proactiveadminservices.com.au
(I did her copywriting)... cheers...

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