Hi everyone, new here.
My business (Link deleted. Please read forum rules (http://www.smallbusinessbrief.com/tos.php) about link usage.) is in a dire need of a good front page description.
Not sure how to go about this. Could someone point me in the right direction?

Thanks for any input.

Here is some info about us.
Company info.
We sell emergency supplies - everything needed for a wide
variety of disasters: individual items (see below), pre-packaged kits,
and, most importantly, custom-designed kits based on customers' needs.
Some examples of what we will be selling are: 72-hour emergency
supplies kits, shelter (emergency blankets, ponchos, tents), water
(packets, purification tablets), food (emergency rations), first aid
(wound care, burn care, medicinals), sanitary items (portable toilets,
personal hygiene), tools (Swiss army, multi-tools, survival knives),
flashlights, to name a few.
Our primary customers will be the end users: people who are trying to
make it through a disaster or are evacuating in anticipation of one.
This could be anyone in disaster prone areas of West coast
(earthquakes), Gulf Coast (hurricanes), Midwest (floods/tornadoes),
for example. Our research indicates that persons who are more likely
to purchase an emergency supplies kit are: married, live in suburban
area, are over 50 years old, and have children. Other examples of our
future clients: office managers (business continuity during
disasters), persons working in office buildings (if need to evacuate
quickly).

Welcome! :welcome:

I'm not sure what you're asking for when you say "front page description." Do you mean you need new home page copy or are you talking about the meta description tag?

If copy, are you looking to hire a copywriter (if yes, we need to move this to a different forum) or do you want a review of your copy and suggestions on how you can improve the writing yourself?

Thanks!